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Two universes in flight—one where teens are the strongest magicians on a newly-enchanted Earth, and one where a quiet operator named Mr. Kincade survives an impossible nanotech “accident” on a world exactly like ours. Read the early cuts, then tell me what to shape next.
Genre: Near-future urban fantasy for teens
Premise (one-liner): Magic comes back—and the kids carry the biggest charge.
Age guidance: 12+ (themes of danger, friendship, agency; no graphic content)
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Attendance was mandatory, which is how you know no one wanted to be there. The gym smelled like rubber and nervous fruit punch. On the bleachers, kids compared Spark stories in the sideways way you talk about a dream—half brags, half please say yours was weirder.
When Ms. Delaney wheeled out the “safety kit,” the overheads flickered. Not from the kit. From us. The air felt like before a storm, but the thunder was inside your teeth. I glanced at the glass case by the office door—the antique lantern the school kept for decoration. It hummed once, so soft I thought I made it up.
“Pair off,” Ms. Delaney said. “We’re going to practice containment.”
We did not pair off. We drifted. We found each other the way filings find a magnet, shy and certain. By the end of first period, seven of us had decided something without saying it: we were done being supervised like a problem. We would meet after school. Not here. Somewhere that didn’t hum.
We thought the lantern was the artifact. It wasn’t. The shadow it cast on the trophy case was. When we traced the outline with chalk, the chalk line went cold. When we touched the cold, it pushed back—like pressing on a drum.
Controls: afternoon only; no touching after sunset; no solo tests.
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Genre: Low-profile spy / techno-thriller (each book stands alone; slow burn arc across the series)
Premise (one-liner): A discreet fixer on today’s Earth survives an illegal nanotech “melt” that should be impossible—then learns to work with what lives under his skin.
Age guidance: Adult (violence implied; tense situations; no gratuitous gore)
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The vial wasn’t supposed to open; it was supposed to be proof. “You bring it sealed,” the broker had said. So Kincade brought it sealed. Until the cab braked hard and the seal hair-line cracked, and the contents did what mercury dreams about—unbeaded, reached, and chose.
It felt like warm ink. It didn’t burn. It listened. It read the sweat map of his palm, slid under the watchband, and went looking for a way in. There was no time to get to a hospital without getting to a report first. He pressed the vial to the curb and watched the last silver thread climb his wrist like it had a schedule.
By the time he reached the café, his pulse had a counter-rhythm. He could hear the room in layers: the hiss of milk, the scrape of spoon, the way the man by the door was trying not to breathe like a runner. The nanotech settled somewhere he couldn’t name and—very quietly—started negotiating.
Test one: silence. The melt dampened his footfall by half if he thought about the sound instead of the step.
Test two: signal. He could feel radio the way you feel a draft, not words, just presence. Networks became weather.
Test three: stress. Under pressure the tech wanted to protect the host, which meant sometimes it wanted to pick the fight. He wrote a rule in his notebook: We do not escalate for proof.
Kincade adjusted his watch crystal and walked into the meeting three minutes early, the same way he always had—like a man for whom nothing unusual had ever happened. It was almost true.
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